Hi blogger's
Welcome back to my blog.
Today I will be sharing with you my literacy experiment that I did with one of my
friends.
We choose to do a golf experiment.
We wanted to look at the angle of the club, and to see if that has a big effect on that.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Cooper,
ReplyDeleteI can't see your google doc with your experiment on it so maybe you could change the share setting so I can see your work. Also maybe next time you create a blog post you could give us a bit more of a description so we can know more in depth what you have done and maybe you could embed your doc into your blog instead of a link.
Mckenna:)
Hi Cooper I wonder if you could put your writing in the right format next time. I like the sound of your experiment sounds quite fun good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Cooper,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your experiment and I thought it was quite interesting.
Next time you could maybe next time you could explain a bit more like what stuff is because I don't really know much about golf and I found it quite hard to understand.
Hi cooper
ReplyDeleteyour experiment looks really cool.
Maybe next time you could have your writing on the page instead of going off the page so that it is easier to read.
I like how you wrote lots about your experiment so that people can understand what its about.
Other then that its really good .