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Thursday, February 27, 2020

THIS IS JUST TO SAY


At Writing today we were writing poems and here is the original Copy below. And below that is my copy.



This is just to say 
BY  William Carlos Williams


I have eaten
The plums
That were in the icebox
And which 
You where
Probably
Saving
For breakfast
Forgive me
They were delicious
So sweet
And so yummy
This is just to say
BY COOPER
I have Thrown
The tomato onto the roof
That was in the garden
And which 
You where
Probably
Saving
For dinner
Forgive me
They were 
So juicy
And so splashy

So I think my poem was pretty good what do you think about?


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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMarch 3, 2020 at 1:51 PM

    Hi cooper i think that you could separate yours and William Carlos Williams for yours. how did you throw the tomato up on the roof is you house a 1 or 2 story house?.

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